That's How Poem by Akhtar Jawad

That's How

Rating: 4.8


You say life is a passing show,
I say life is still in its teens,
Enjoy it as much as you can,
You are a pessimist,
I am an optimist,
That's how we now live together!

You say you can't dance anymore,
I say if I can still sing,
Try once again, you'll dance,
Get up sweet heart,
Nature has started playing its guitar,
That's how we now enjoy music!

You say, 'I am half empty, '
I say you are still half filled,
I am still an Adam, are you the same Eve?
once left the heaven, left it for ever,
You are not guilty, He wanted that.
That's how the lovers now talk on the earth!

Suddenly the clouds start their dance,
The pleasant wind then sings sweetly,
The naughty moon half hidden in the clouds,
Aroma of Jasmines and Queen of Night
Smiles of nature envelope the earth,
That's how nature approves their love!

Thursday, September 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 21 September 2015

Very Romantic..... you are young enough to have another round of dance! Though your sweet heart is fatigued, your spirited persuasion will fill her with fresh energy and she will also join you in a wonderful waltz! Enjoyed the poem!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 September 2015

Romantic write and thrilling expression. The poems ends in an amusing dance like........Suddenly the clouds start their dance, The pleasant wind then sings sweetly, The naughty moon half hidden in the clouds, Aroma of Jasmines and Queen of Night Smiles of nature envelope the earth, That's how nature approves their love! ........... Marvellous poem.....10

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Kelly Kurt 17 September 2015

Your poetry is always so visual and romantic. You are a young man at heart, my friend.

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M Asim Nehal 17 September 2015

Wonderful Poem...............Inspiring and intimidating...........Loved it.

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