The boy who loves me so,
Holds me tight never let me go
Tho I have pushed him away
He is always here and stay,
He who loves me, wants me
Yet I wanted to be free,
No commitment found in the heart of mine
So I tell him he is wasting his time.
Never will I fall inlove again
No never will I allow the pain
So doing all that would go to waste
Cause I need a huge amount of space.
But the boy who loves me so
Will waits for my love to grow
For his love never grow old, he say
Tho I do push him away.
How are two people who care for each to achieve simultaneous stimulation, elation. It's vexed situation whether or not it is is mutual. I cannot imagine wiser or more helpful than yours.
perfectly scripted story of a honest love.. and that one needs a space.. good write. thank you for sharing.10+++
I think you are a song writer. This is very clear, but the English has to improve. I hope you won't be exploited by these 'boys' who say they love you, but will use you and then throw you away. Beware of teenage infatuation. Blessings. You have good song writing talent!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Mild and weighty lines brilliantly rhymed. A pleasure to read, dear poet.