kanav justa

Veteran Poet - 1,064 Points (Shimla)

The Chosen One - Poem by kanav justa

They said i was the chosen one
chosen by the mankind
one who catches fly at will
those flies now i must find

seven in one attempt
was the best i ever cought
but to catch those flies in hand
not a single dime i got

so if you got some flies at home
and if you want them dead
fly that veil inside your store
or sleeps beneath the bed

next time when you would see them buzz
or hear their brm brm sound
no dollar would i charge to catch
only just fifty pound

so if i catch twenty of them
fifty is the price for one
no discount please expect from me
once my job is done


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Comments about The Chosen One by kanav justa

  • Gold Star - 8,734 Points Geetha Jayakumar (12/7/2013 1:09:00 PM)

    Interesting poem Kanav. Your charges are too high, I will order, but let me save some penny for it..... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 390 Points Marie Shine (12/6/2013 9:04:00 AM)

    A very unique write, penned with humour, a sense of fun and wit! Very enjoyable read, Kanav! Your methods seem like a very good alternative to sprays and other deterrents. Nice penning! Thank you for sharing... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,439 Points Kavya . (12/5/2013 2:57:00 AM)

    heheh a v hilarious poem.........i recall my childhood days wen me n my bro used to compete with each other as to who would kill the max no of houseflies that used to buzz around mostly during rainy seasons..........so u too a fly catcher! hmmmm...shall surely think of u when flies outnumber n the repellants stop working: -) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,763 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (12/4/2013 5:53:00 AM)

    I tink a poet can b anyting. Yor soaring imagination cud take u frm being a fly catcher to magic carpets. Enjoyd yor fun super poem kanav. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,726 Points Dinesh Nair (12/3/2013 6:38:00 AM)

    A magnet for catching the flies is going to be invented by the Japanese soon! Just for house flies! I read it.somewhere. But before that happens you will have caught all the flies. But the way catch them is more important and so this proposal is great. Yet another Kanav Justa poem for honouring this December and the PH forum... Thank you for penning down this unique piece. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 168 Points Ruby Mostazir (12/3/2013 4:41:00 AM)

    You have a strange power dat makes ur poems so unique.... always.
    i love dis Funny Flies Fiction. & i will knock you next summer Lol :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,181 Points Valsa George (12/2/2013 10:45:00 PM)

    During summer when fruits ripe, especially with jack fruits going over ripe and rotten, plenty of flies come buzzing! Then
    I will surely call you! But your charges are too high... Nogotiable? Interesting! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,676 Points Neela Nath (12/2/2013 7:59:00 PM)

    Easy flow and the rhythm are commendable! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,297 Points * Sunprincess * (12/2/2013 10:59:00 AM)

    oh kanav, I love the title yes...but I expected something totally different...
    still I am intrigued with this beautiful poem.. I love the rhythm,
    flow and rhyme...you are definitely the best poet I have ever read! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 2, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, December 2, 2013


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