The Clouds Poem by Kudakwashe Roak Mutama

The Clouds

Rating: 5.0


The clouds were not there,
When the stars provided us with light
This is why I’m still waiting for the clouds
To reveal the light of the stars
Because I know that beyond these clouds
There is the moon and the bright stars
It’s only after these clouds move,
That we can all see the bright stars

No matter how hard the clouds
Try to hide the stars
That will never disqualify their existence
Because the stars will always be there
Even though we cannot see them
I know that the time will come
When we will sing and dance every night
Because the stars will be providing us with light

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 29 June 2010

The clouds are a blanket and the stars are sleeping.

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Cindy Magaya 28 November 2012

waal this is really nice. No matter how hard the clouds Try to hide the stars That will never disqualify their existence Because the stars will always be there sure this is inspiring

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Bradley Dean 10 July 2010

'No matter how hard the clouds Try to hide the stars That will never disqualify their existence' Deep words, with an enlightened meaning. 10/10

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Pranab K Chakraborty 01 July 2010

THIS IS WHY I'M WAITING FOR THE CLOUDS TO REVEAL THE LIGHT OF THE STARS............... Yes, it needs a brave heart to face all the challenges of life. Bravo. Stand strong on your own feet and fight straight against dark. Not only excellent expression, it also acts as the voice to recite thousand times in singles life anywhere anytime on the globe. Star symbolizes the eternal truth, and clouds are the relative hardles of daily life which pulls us back to attain there..............Congratulation! ! ! Write more poet........more you write. Regards, 10+++ pranab

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 June 2010

know that the time will come When we will sing and dance every night Because the stars will be providing us with light Clouds as negative powers trying to hide the beauty of the stars.. nice idea thank u for sharing.

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Poetic Soul 29 June 2010

Well-penned...nicely thought out

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