The Conquerors. Poem by Fay Slimm

The Conquerors.

Rating: 4.5


Each one a gem.
A shining orb of pride, who,
Midst dungeon-dark of alien age,
Aspired to good.
They saw the road.
They caught the hidden shine amongst the slime
And took a-hold.


Grasping Hope they grappled up.
And, wrenching each sin-laden limb
From deep within, the climb began
To Elevation.
Though slowed with sick humanity's century-heavy load
Of fallen man.


The way was pained,
Was stabbed with sharp and bruising stones of Self
Oozing grudge, and greased with greed.


And all the while, as upward peering
Through the mists
They groped in loveless gloom, they clung to need.
Soul-sobbing frames.
Set on search for healing flames
Of full and statured life.
They staggered on.


But not alone, as through gross dark there surged
A shaft of lifting light. A hearing ear was won.
Now, showered with sun, celestial powered
Which sparked with selfless joy,
Upward soared.


Their brilliance yet more brighter seems
As earth's sad death-throes vomit gall.
Their radiance beams.
Enlightened truth emit's it's timeless news of hope.
Ascending, they send forth a shout.......
'Existence is not what it seems'.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Petz 18 December 2008

Whether scientific or Darwinianly(is that a word?) , accurate., a ray of hope, I hear 'Ode To Joy' playing majestically in the background. All BS aside a very well thought out work Fay..

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Fred Babbin 16 August 2008

I think we are looking at existence from different viewpoints. You seem to judge and stress hope, while I (I think) tend not to put values on actions, but to describe them as I see them. One is not better than the other. They are just different. and that is what I was saying.

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