Lillie Ellis

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The girl in the mirror


She's the girl in the mirror
The girl in the glass
She is just trying to last
She's the girl in the mirror
The girl in the glass

She's the girl in the mirror
The girl in the glass
She wants to get out
But all she does is put on a pout
She taps on the glass
Hoping someone will pass
She's sick of waiting
And sick of baiting
She's the girl in the mirror
The girl in the glass

She's the girl in the mirror
The girl in the glass
She sits alone
And all she does is moan
She yells for help
But it sounds more of a yelp
She hates her life
And goes for the knife...
She's the girl in the mirror
The girl in the glass

She's the girl in the mirror
The girl in the glass
She believes it's too late
and she doesn't believe in fate
she wants help but doesn't ask
it seems like more of a task
She wants to love
But it seems above
She's the girl in the mirror
The girl in the glass

I'm the girl in the mirror
The girl in the glass
I am just trying to last
I'm the girl in the mirror
The girl in the glass

Submitted: Thursday, May 07, 2009
Edited: Sunday, May 10, 2009

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  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (8/2/2009 9:36:00 AM)

    She's the girl in the mirror
    The girl in the glass
    She wants to get out
    But all she does is put on a pout
    She taps on the glass
    Hoping someone will pass
    She's sick of waiting
    And sick of baiting
    She's the girl in the mirror
    The girl in the glass

    well written and intersting..yes he miror has this effect to show the truth as you expressed here in a professional way and the way you did this poem is heartfelt..well done.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lacie Wasserman (6/11/2009 3:19:00 PM)

    Love what your saying. But you cnat just wait for someone to come help you, you have to go out there and help yourself before anyone will be willing to help you. :) Keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~Crystal Midnight~ (6/7/2009 7:19:00 PM)

    very cool idea... great job.
    ~CM~ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Elizabeth Resendiz (5/22/2009 10:24:00 AM)

    really good! i really like it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Helen Williams (5/17/2009 9:09:00 AM)

    Another great piece of work, i also could relate to this one as im sure so many could, keep em comming girl! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Emily Oldham (5/11/2009 2:17:00 PM)

    wow great poem, i can so relate! thanks keep writing
    Athena

    *** words will change the world *** (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zachary Clark (5/8/2009 3:01:00 PM)

    Shouting in anger at the passing of lives but none understand what you are feeling inside good write thank you very much.10++++++ Keep your head up. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Barbara Terry (5/7/2009 5:27:00 PM)

    This descibes a lot of us Lillie. 'Let me out' is the silent scream no one hears from the girl in mirror, the girl in the glass. But we must strive to last though so that maybe one day some one passing by will free the girl in the mirror, the girl in the glass. A wonderful ethereal write and all too often true for some of us. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing.

    Love & hugs,
    Barbara (Report) Reply

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