I shall wait for that day
till the last ray of the sun,
when I rise at the peak
and be next to none..
I know this won't be easy,
but I don't like things that are.
What is the fun of fighting
when it is not a gruesome war! !
Take this as my confidence or
think I am heading for a fall,
'cause it doesnt make a difference
as it is better than not rising at all.
I can sense my time is coming
and it is smelling just so fine.
Hide your faces, you doubters! !
The glory shall be mine...
I am not quite sure what war the writer is referring to, but the poem itself is masterful in its presentation to the reader. It is so good, in fact, I doubt if the readers of this will care which war he is referring to. The only important part here is the execution of this poem. It is so good, as to be magnificent. GW62
It is refreshing to see that confidence of youth expressed so clearly in this fine poem, Vaibhav. Of course, it does not take in the harsh realities of life, where dreams do not come true nor are all hopes realized. However, I liked this poem, it's challenge almost carelessly thrown at the world as the young are wont to do. Glory is a nice but fleeting thing, but I hope you do attain your piece of it! Carl.
You have an amazing talent and I believe the glory you tell about shall be yours, Vaibhav. God bless. Y.M.
dear vaibhav......your poem shows, both spirit and ambition.young man i am happy, that you have a goal, and you want to show the world! great poem, lved reading it.best wishes. ritty
I can sense my time is coming and it is smelling just so fine. Hide your faces, you doubters! ! The glory shall be mine... i love this..a nice message
your poem finds heart in every readers....wonderful and beautiful indeed...thank you and God bless.......
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Positive thinking is the key to achievement