the man i was
i was
-foolish
-young
-unprepared
-weak
-lazy
-half-hearted
the man i am now
i am
-wiser
-older
-better equiped
-stronger
-more determined
-to keep doing better
the man i see
says to me
-be wiser
-be bolder
-be stronger
-be determined
-be better
-be your best
the man i hope to be
i hope to
-be wise
-be bold
-be young in mind
-be completely equiped
-be the strongest
-always be determined
-always be my best
After reading your Poem, I also Hope To Be -be wise -be bold -be young in mind -be completely equiped -be the strongest Some Gud Qualities, which every one develop in order to excel in his/her life. keep it up! !
Life is what we make it, and we are responsble for our actions and choices. Candidly written.
You have a very good perception of your own responsibility for taking care of yourself. You will achieve great things in life, not the least amongst them will be your writing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sounds real reasonable - MERRY NEW ONE