Allen Steble

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**the man i was, the man i am, the man i see, the man i hope to be


the man i was
i was
-foolish
-young
-unprepared
-weak
-lazy
-half-hearted

the man i am now
i am
-wiser
-older
-better equiped
-stronger
-more determined
-to keep doing better

the man i see
says to me
-be wiser
-be bolder
-be stronger
-be determined
-be better
-be your best

the man i hope to be
i hope to
-be wise
-be bold
-be young in mind
-be completely equiped
-be the strongest
-always be determined
-always be my best

Submitted: Thursday, January 01, 2009
Edited: Thursday, January 01, 2009

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  • Rookie Sunand Sharma (1/12/2009 8:41:00 AM)

    After reading your Poem, I also Hope To Be

    -be wise
    -be bold
    -be young in mind
    -be completely equiped
    -be the strongest

    Some Gud Qualities, which every one develop in order to excel in his/her life.
    keep it up! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jan Fuentez (1/7/2009 8:32:00 PM)

    Life is what we make it, and we are responsble for our actions and choices. Candidly written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ted Sheridan (1/5/2009 10:47:00 PM)

    You have a very good perception of your own responsibility for taking care of yourself. You will achieve great things in life, not the least amongst them will be your writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Asha Ariz (1/5/2009 10:00:00 PM)

    straight to the point what you want to be
    nice, thumbs up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - -1 Points Maxim Muyu (1/1/2009 9:28:00 AM)

    This is so great and awesome, lovely piece. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - -1 Points Maxim Muyu (1/1/2009 9:28:00 AM)

    This is so great and awesome, lovely piece. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Joseph Poewhit (1/1/2009 9:15:00 AM)

    Sounds real reasonable - MERRY NEW ONE (Report) Reply

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