The Missing Wrinkles Poem by Akhtar Jawad

The Missing Wrinkles

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Sweetheart! I have kept a record of my kisses,
I see a few wrinkles are missing from your face.
Let me read the wrinkles,
I want to know which the kisses are
that you have missed,
love stories are the wrinkles of a face
and writer is the time,
I can read the wrinkles.
Oh! Your maiden kiss is missing,
and the one in the night of wedding,
again when you gave birth to my first child.
Can you tell me where these wrinkles are?
And when you smiled I dived into eyes,
And I saw three mermaids
swimming in the ocean of your heart,
I realized,
time couldn't change them in wrinkles.
How naughty are the women!
When they preserve something in their hearts,
it becomes mermaids!

Friday, January 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,time,writings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalid Saifullah 07 August 2018

a very good comment by Kelly Kurt, a diary of pains and pleasures.

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Kelly Kurt 30 January 2016

A dairy of wrinkles and kisses. The manuscript of a lifetime of love.

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M Asim Nehal 29 January 2016

Awesome, keeping record of kisses is unique and counting stocks of kisses is amazing all in all a fantastic love poetry yet again.10 +++++

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Abhilasha Bhatt 29 January 2016

time couldn't change them in wrinkles. How naughty are the women! When they preserve something in their hearts, it becomes mermaids! .... A beautiful poem as usual......thank you for sharing :)

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