The Naughty Number Eight Poem by Akhtar Jawad

The Naughty Number Eight

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Oh You! The naughty number eight,
Why do you like to play with my fate?
I don’t believe in numerology,
Still I see you are naughty with me,
Sometimes you make me smile,
Sometimes you make me cry,
Have been eventful throughout my life,
But I don’t like you when I watch beauty.

Oh you! The naughty number eight,
I know you, I can’t under rate,
I was born on February,8, at 800 hours,
I multiply you by two,
A sweet sixteen enlightens the sight,
And you appear as sexy sun goggles,
On the eyes of a lovely girl,
And an excited boy of twenty only!

When I told you to stripe a little,
You obeyed the command,
I started looking into deep brown eyes,
You got an opportunity to crawl and crawl,
To the bosom of the girl,
I took some time to come out of the pool,
And you scoundrel, went further inside,
How naughty you are!

I shall not give a command anymore,
I am afraid of you,
You may crawl to places,
Where I can’t see you,
It’s bright and sunny lovely day,
Ahead of the day is a moonlit night,
I shall see you tonight,
Till then remain where you are.

Fifty years have passed,
How obedient you are,
You are still there,
Not crawled downwards
Remain there,
I have started loving you now!

Saturday, August 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: fun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 26 August 2015

A nice imaginative poem where I was enjoying the undulating 8 being sometimes somewhere and again somewhere else along with the variance of thoughts. Interesting one! ! ! !

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M Asim Nehal 22 August 2015

Nice rhythmic poem...........

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Jaishree Nair 22 August 2015

A thread of thought well defined. The vagaries of 8 playing hide n seek in naughtiness humorously penned. Thank you

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Khalida Bano Ali 22 August 2015

An interesting poem........................................10

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Gajanan Mishra 22 August 2015

I have started loving you.. good one..

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