Bella Ravenstar

Rookie (Southern California)

The Portal - Poem by Bella Ravenstar

One day
At school
The teens
Were in detention
In the computer lab
Their punishment
Scrubbing the walls
Then one
Found a door
And opened it
Walking through
Starting to float
He heard his thoughts
And spoke not a word
Through his mind
He called his pals
They came through that door
And were amazed by this specatacle
All their thoughts spoke
And were heard
Then one made a wish
To be an epmress of China
That came true
Dressed in lavish robes
A palace appeared
And she wished for servants
And they came near
They all started to wish
And they were all granted
Fullfilling their deepest wishes
One a movie star
The other a famous football player
One a prized pop star
One a super hero
They stayed for hours
And the portal closed
Sending them back
To the dreary world
Sad were they
Hurring home
Not breathing a word
Of their discovery
To not a soul
The next day
Sent back to detention
Found the portal
And continuned their dreams real
Stayed for hours
Then the portal closed
The next day to the portal
The friends paths departed
Too into their dreams
This world created
The next day
Into the portal
They stayed
They became greedy
Diving into their riches
Of fullfilled desires
Then the portal closed
They cared not an ounce
Dreams kept flowing
They were glad
Doing the things they longed to do
Many strong bonds broken
But forever trapped in paradise
For eternity


Comments about The Portal by Bella Ravenstar

  • Rookie Michael Campbell (5/7/2008 6:32:00 PM)

    that's worth a ten and then some (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Will P. Litter (5/7/2008 6:31:00 PM)

    I like the idea of your poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 7, 2008



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