The Same Cute Doll Poem by Akhtar Jawad

The Same Cute Doll

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Capable of moving her eyelids only
Stolen from my sweetheart, similarity
Hadn't learnt by then how to smile
Having only music of her crying ability
The doll that came into my waiting arms
With aesthetic inherited amazing charms

Has now grown and learnt how to smile
Pleased! She smiles like her grandmother
Let me pray. May she smile always ever!
To the old cap, may she add a feather!
The gorgeous doll has been engaged today
Starts another act of life's beautiful play!

The Same Cute Doll
Tuesday, December 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
On December 8,2018 my granddaughter Bisma, daughter of my daughter Shahla, was engaged to Raheel.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susheela Shiju 11 December 2018

so beautifully you penned it dear Sir! enjoyed reading it! May God bless your granddaughter and her fiance in this new journey of life!

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Rajnish Manga 11 December 2018

Congratulations to the entire family on this auspicious occasion. We also wish your grand daughter, Bisma, a poetess in her own right, A life full of smiles. Thanks, Akhtar sahab for the sentiments shared in these lines.

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rafiquefarooqi@gmail.com 11 December 2018

A beautiful poem

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Rafique Farooqi 11 December 2018

A beautiful poem...............................

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Bisma 12 December 2018

The best of best.. love it

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 December 2018

A heart warming poem that touches the heart. A lovely couple made for each other. Bless the young couple and happiness to the entire family.

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 December 2018

beautiful poem on granddaughter's engagement

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 December 2018

A beautiful poem that strengthens the bond of a family. Very heartwarming write. Congratulations, Sir Akhtar. You got a beautiful family.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 December 2018

A very lovely poem. Grandchildren are considered as crowns of grandparents. They are the joys and gems of the family. How lucky are those grandparents who have seen their grandchildren start a beautiful life of their own.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 December 2018

beautiful gal beautiful boy may they their future life enjoy like her grandma and grand pop wow is all i can say CONGRATS JAWAD JI THIS simple POET DOES CONVEY HIPP HIP HURRAY

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