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marvin brato
(8/25/2008 11:15:00 PM) |
Either ways... joy or pain surfaces on both ends, its just that the two can never come at the same time! A 10.
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
(8/22/2008 7:34:00 PM) |
i don't need 3 seconds, even if i've to wait all day, yeahhh i'm gonna do it coz all day would make all love! nice piece Tim A +
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Ron Flowers
(8/21/2008 10:19:00 PM) |
I love your rhym scheme and and I like the natural flow. An enjoyable read.
Ron
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Dawn Slanker
(8/21/2008 2:40:00 PM) |
Very nice. I really like the rhythm and rhyme of this as well as the unique theme.
If you don't mind, I have one little suggestion. I feel that the last line would flow a bit better if you removed the words 'of a'. Other than that, it's great. Well done.
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Clarissa Tobey
(8/19/2008 1:04:00 PM) |
so beautiful.. your words are so true
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Anjali Sinha
(8/19/2008 12:54:00 PM) |
wow the euphoria! ! ! ! ! ! ! of the wait. lovely words and gud rhyming
+++++++++++10 dear tim.
love anju
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