Ben Gieske

- The Sunshine Of My Life (Etheree) - Poem by Ben Gieske

to my face
your warmth I feel
sleeping in the grass
I love your satin dreams
floating in your cotton fields
promising hopes and burning fires
you are spring and seasons long where all
begins and blossoms rue through you and me


This poem was published in the last issue of SP Quill Magazine, Volume 6, Issue 22, Number 2, November of 2009

Comments about - The Sunshine Of My Life (Etheree) by Ben Gieske

  • Gold Star - 5,314 Points Ken E Hall (2/21/2010 4:49:00 AM)

    All the words gel together like sunshine seasons enveloping love with the warmth of sunshine,
    a poem that does not come all that easy with this excellent standard Ben ++++10+
    regards (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 71 Points Indira Babbellapati (12/17/2009 9:52:00 AM)

    it flows like satin... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ritty Patnaik (12/16/2009 11:23:00 PM)

    dear ben,
    i know exactly the feeling of this poem.great write, and i really enjoyed the warmth seeping in with closed eyes and day dreaming......sometimes i wish there was more time to stand and stare at natures unblemished beauty..this goes down as my favourite..thanks.
    ritty (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 111 Points Meggie Gultiano (12/12/2009 10:32:00 PM)

    love your satin dreams
    floating in your cotton fields
    marvelous lines, deserving for publication.
    I really admire your works, Sir..

    Meggie (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zachary Glitch (12/12/2009 7:56:00 PM)

    I applaude the beauty and flow of this marvelous piece. It deserved to be published.10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 190 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (12/12/2009 7:07:00 PM)

    took me home to the Caribbean.. when i used to lay on the grass with my dogs..
    a fantastic piece (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 12, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 12, 2009

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