Premila Patel


The Temptress! - Poem by Premila Patel

She’s a temptress!
Red lipstick and hot heels
She’s a mystery
She’s a heartbreaker
She’s powerful
She’s pretty & charming
She’s genuine
She’s confident & intelligent
She’s controversial
She’s popular
Her love is contagious.
Men love her, women hate her,
Excites the men, upsets the women (unintentionally)
Never underestimate her
She’s innocent.
Let the mystery unfold….

She's a pure VIRGIN VIXEN……..!
Hey! Hey!


Comments about The Temptress! by Premila Patel

  • Rookie Daniel Kempson (8/16/2009 1:42:00 PM)

    Great write Premila good content and men beware 10 Daniel (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Ted M (8/2/2009 12:57:00 PM)

    Your description of a temptress is so elaborate, there's no room for any doubt. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 460 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (5/7/2009 3:32:00 PM)

    She’s innocent.
    Let the mystery unfold…
    temptress is what mystery yet riffles
    desire trudges through by degree....most passionate write by imagery, yet irresistible by
    force of love, crible of unique genre,10++++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yvonne Selase (4/8/2009 1:43:00 PM)

    i read this poem twice. it just makes me smile. good work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (4/4/2009 11:10:00 PM)

    Hey can you give me her cell no...............i can match her in every quality..........joking.........10+++++........Good Write......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aldo Kraas (3/23/2009 6:48:00 AM)

    I am not sure if you are talking about a singer in your poems?
    I think you are talking about Madonna. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 20, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, April 10, 2009


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