The Waiting Poem by Rani Turton

The Waiting

Rating: 5.0


I had been waiting
Night after night
Until my tears had
Almost dimmed my sight

I had been waiting
And wondering for long
If life was only this
Dreary long song

I was then thinking
I should strive and grow
And even let this secret,
This love of mine show

This then is destiny
A road chalked out alone
Written in tears
In blood and in bone

Mine then is this journey
An uncertain end
To never know if you will wait
Around the next winding bend.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 15 September 2008

Lovely emotional composition, love it.10 for it.

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Abha Sharma 25 March 2008

very emotional and deep.... hope tears will not be there with anyone to dim the sight.

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Tsira Goge 21 March 2008

Rani, It is fine emotional expectations...Best wishes... Tsira

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A desire leads to a journey, it's destiny. Emotional read, thank you for posting it.

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Broken Peaces 20 January 2008

Sometimes Rani we have to make the first move, lovely write may your wish come true and hope he is deserving of you 10 Chris

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