abdul razaq

Rookie - 0 Points (august 10,1971 / faisalabad, pakistan)

The Whisper(Sun) - Poem by abdul razaq

When we were sleeping early in the morning
Rays of sun comes into our room
Knock our doors
Hello........man of God
Hurry up, get up, ready for work

When we were working, at noon
Sun comes straight on our head
Says, hey man, , , , , stop your work
Have your lunch
Take a nap
When we were close to finish the day
Sun turns it, s attitude, becomes kind heart
says us, leave your work, you have tired
it, s sufficient for today, sleep itself also

April 4,2008


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  • Rookie - 33 Points Sangnam Nam (7/28/2009 5:27:00 PM)

    noon time on the fiels
    sweat staind back
    needs cool air and
    the sun calms its rays

    Lisa Nam is .. Sangnam Nam is ..... Nam, Sang-Nam (1959-) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 4, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 6, 2008

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