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abdul razaq

(august 10,1971 / faisalabad, pakistan)

The whisper(sun)


When we were sleeping early in the morning
Rays of sun comes into our room
Knock our doors
Hello........man of God
Hurry up, get up, ready for work

When we were working, at noon
Sun comes straight on our head
Says, hey man, , , , , stop your work
Have your lunch
Take a nap
When we were close to finish the day
Sun turns it, s attitude, becomes kind heart
says us, leave your work, you have tired
it, s sufficient for today, sleep itself also

April 4,2008

Abdulrazaq

Submitted: Friday, April 04, 2008
Edited: Sunday, April 06, 2008
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  • Sangnam Nam (7/28/2009 5:27:00 PM)

    noon time on the fiels
    sweat staind back
    needs cool air and
    the sun calms its rays
    down


    Lisa Nam is .. Sangnam Nam is ..... Nam, Sang-Nam (1959-) (Report) Reply

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