This Point In Time Poem by Rani Turton

This Point In Time

Rating: 5.0


Then come to me with the breeze ruffling your hair
The setting sun in your eyes
The same blue as the sea and the skies

Then the whisper of your presence will tell me
You are not far
Strange thoughts will come to mind

That the sea is smooth tonight
That the harbour is full of light
That the cafés overlook the piers
That the rain will fall softly on already wet cheeks
And gentle waves slurp into the creeks

That waiting here is a fallacy
That I should be somewhere else at this point in time
That I should be somewhere else at this point in time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 03 July 2008

The same blue as the sea and the skies...................... the legacy of love all ruffle in blue eyes raves up by the setting sun by the side whisper mellows by the dust of twilight.................wonderful appreciation of moment when luscious green, well penned.10+, thanks for shring

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Flora Gillingham 25 March 2008

There is a lovely rhythm to this poem, and vivid imagery too. F

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Abha Sharma 22 March 2008

the refrain is very touching.... with vivd imagery..

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Broken Peaces 15 March 2008

Stay there i will join you, that was such a nice write Rani 10 Chris

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