Gold you are all
Most of us are not
Fresh men and fresh women we are!
We are nicknamed thus!
Shine of the yellow metal
Soon may begin to haunt us
And our silver and bronze may not show the path anymore!
We may shed a few tears thenceforth!
Gold has a history
It looks down upon silver and the mean ones below it.
Gold has another history
It is not safe to have it ever!
Dear PH Website Manager,
You have divided us all for no reason.
Soon you will forsake us in a wilderness
Of a kingdom once well ruled! !
Gold, silver and bronze are sobbing...
An interesting but quite true write. Metals of honor (no pun intended) should not be placed on poets. Lets keep it real. Truthfully said.
Quiet Interesting write. Fantastic lines..... Shine of the yellow metal Soon may begin to haunt us And our silver may not show the path anymore! We may shed a few tears thenceforth! I am just wondering, we all are climbing mountains of silver, yellow, then after reaching top of mountain, what we will do next.... Very true said. It's just dividing on basis of class. First of all there is much problem to login to PH. When ever I try to login, the site not available or not to origin.
You are so correct Dinesh! It is rather disgusting to see gold and silver and bronze everywhere as a badge on everyone! It is cumbersome! It only gives a splashy glitter and divides people who were once just one class....poets!
Kingdom once ruled should be forsaken with same rule with undivided attraction. Nice poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
yes, i agree with you...........there's no gold, silver or bronze...............we shouldn't be parted..............all poets are equal; great in their own style..................i liked your style of writing................very unique thought...........thanks...10/10.