Tracing Shadows. Poem by Fay Slimm
Tracing Shadows.
Everything appears
..................in just it's own time.
Birthed from need. we
.... blossomed for a short while.
Our summer was dappled
......with passion's juices.
We traced with abandonment
................love's fruitage.
Mem'ries now walk my mind,
........................tenuously.
Only to vanish
..........when reason impends.
.
Yet their traces leave
........fragranced afterglow.
I value the love
.......you taught me to show.
This is a wonderfully expressed appreciation of love, Fay, and such a beautifully and enchantingly lovely phrased poem as well. There are few who can even approach your talent and skill for writing romantic poems, and you write them so consistently, it's always a great pleasure to read your work. Carl.
Written as delightfully as you do - how I have missed this: -) Hi Fay - This is one of your best... absolutely everything Bob said: -)
a woven tapestry of youth sublime carefree days embroidered with time memorized threads of yesteryear a warm afterglow of a heart you share
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 5:46:46 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Yes Fay. I do agree with Carl.. you write very well... this is lovely to read.. yet there is message in this poem too, isn't it? ? ? .... And not many can express such beautiful words of wisdom through lovely poems.. very nice, and you do write lots of lovely poems, too.. I can't write like you// but love reading them..10 with love shan