Treasure Unfound. Poem by Fay Slimm

Treasure Unfound.

Rating: 4.5


Deep inside the feel is
..........................mysterious.
His mind reels
.....as dark solid rock enfolds.

Ebb-tide shelving floor
.....of washed sand appears
And lures our adventurer
..............nearer, - - - so bold!

Peering into the gloom
.................he tiptoes forward.
Dripping room of rocks
...............could hide treasure!

Alcoved maybe, mermaid's
....................... secreted hoard.
Coins - - up from the deep.
..................casketed pleasure!

Prepared for discovery,
........................bent with greed,
His fingers entered, groped
And found...............Seaweed!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 21 August 2009

I like the suspense in this write Fay and the comical ending lol well done my friend Lynda xx 10

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Carol Gall 21 August 2009

this is so great fay 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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