ANGER
An acid
If bottled tight
Is sure to explode
Pernicious
FEAR
Hiding serpents
In unlit corners
Kissing with hungry lips
Poison
a chemistry of fear to anger...lovable stytle ANGER An acid If bottled tight Is sure to explode Pernicious
Keep the cap lose and don't reach invisible corners. Avoid danger by all means. Nice warnings. Thank you.
a great surrealist design woven for these primal elements! much loved it.
Wow Valsa you have a wonderful way with words well done great poem
Regarding anger and fear it has been so impressively delineated. Anger is explode Pernicious. Beautiful poem. Visited time and again.
Brilliant.... You have so neatly comprehended these two highly sensitive facets in their absolute accuracy! Liked your prudent perception dear madam...10/10
Anger is just like an acid. This burns and engulfs entire mankind and no humanity is seen. This provokes thought like fear. You have also amazingly expressed fear here. Fear and anger are vices. We should avoid these. A brilliant twin poem is well penned...10
per·ni·cious p?r'niSH?s/ adjective adjective: pernicious 1. having a harmful effect, esp. in a gradual or subtle way. the pernicious influences of the mass media synonyms: harmful, damaging, destructive, injurious, hurtful, detrimental, deleterious, dangerous, adverse, inimical, unhealthy, unfavorable, bad, evil, baleful, wicked, malign, malevolent, malignant, noxious, poisonous, corrupting; More literarymaleficent a pernicious influence on society antonyms: beneficial Origin More late Middle English: from Latin perniciosus ‘destructive, ’ from pernicies ‘ruin, ’ based on nex, nec- ‘death.’ Translate pernicious to Use over time for: pernicious VALSA, HERE IS MY LATEST MISCHIEF! i would complain about your use of pernicious (privately complain of course) BUT i guess i really am not entitled to complain since the definition says esp./especially, NOT always, in a gradual or subtle way. so i'll be lenient....this time! but watch your step! ! ! ! :) bri YIKES! i had better carry a flashlight/torch and watch those unlit corners! ! ! ! i'll send this to MyPoemList, partly because i doubt i have any......what are they called? ......cinquains there. no choo choo trains either.
Anger plus fear equals self destruction. Try to eradicate both and you will survive its elements. A good explanation of both in your Twin Cinquains.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I am angry that my fears are there to stay...