Twin Triplets.No.14. Birth N' Death, Deadly Love Poem by Valsa George

Twin Triplets.No.14. Birth N' Death, Deadly Love



BIRTH n’ DEATH

If waking is a mini birth
And sleeping, a minor death
Aren’t we born and dead everyday?

DEADLY LOVE

Oh! How thousands immolate themselves
And charred to chunks of coal
In the mushroom holocaust of love!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adheez Van Der Beanthz 27 July 2013

simple, meaningful and beautiful thanks for sharing

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 July 2013

Contrasting triplets. We are also dead when we see injustice and are helpless to act. Thank you.

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Danny Draper 28 July 2013

Succinct and powerful coupling, the first evocative the latter provocative.

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Patricia Grantham 28 July 2013

Twin short and inspiring writes. Love like coal can grow hot and burn then turn to ashes when cold then grows old! Nice write.

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Ramesh Rai 29 July 2013

life is action action is life

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 August 2018

If waking is a mini birth And sleeping, a minor death Aren’t we born and dead everyday? ...... yes, we are. everyday it is happening. Oh! How thousands immolate themselves........in true love it happen. Both Triplets are well penned. Beautiful poems shared amazingly.

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Akhtar Jawad 18 April 2018

Every new breath is death of the last breath. Thoughtful!

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 November 2016

Life and death! Walking along. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Heather Wilkins 10 August 2013

a good write on birth and death

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Chandra Thiagarajan 30 July 2013

I am with you, Valsa in your 1st triplet as in the same vein I had composed a poem! As for your 2nd one the deadly love is well spelled!

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