BIRTH n’ DEATH
If waking is a mini birth
And sleeping, a minor death
Aren’t we born and dead everyday?
DEADLY LOVE
Oh! How thousands immolate themselves
And charred to chunks of coal
In the mushroom holocaust of love!
Contrasting triplets. We are also dead when we see injustice and are helpless to act. Thank you.
Succinct and powerful coupling, the first evocative the latter provocative.
Twin short and inspiring writes. Love like coal can grow hot and burn then turn to ashes when cold then grows old! Nice write.
If waking is a mini birth And sleeping, a minor death Aren’t we born and dead everyday? ...... yes, we are. everyday it is happening. Oh! How thousands immolate themselves........in true love it happen. Both Triplets are well penned. Beautiful poems shared amazingly.
Life and death! Walking along. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I am with you, Valsa in your 1st triplet as in the same vein I had composed a poem! As for your 2nd one the deadly love is well spelled!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
simple, meaningful and beautiful thanks for sharing