Lucifera Santez

Rookie - 234 Points (4th feb / Belize)

Untarnished - Poem by Lucifera Santez

The stark whiteness is all I see,
Perhaps it’s just reflection,
Of conflicting emotions in me,
Every facet with a brilliant glow,
Rainbows dance
On the brink of that snow,
But something else catches my eye,
A scarlet shade in that austere white,
A rose blooming,
Its thorns frozen,
Leaves the darkest of emeralds,
It’s just a small torn corner,
Like pious part of my soul
Trapped in confines of a sinner’s heart…………..

Comments about Untarnished by Lucifera Santez

  • Silver Star - 3,805 Points Md Asadullah (1/18/2014 1:05:00 PM)

    Emotions well painted , thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,570 Points Om Chawla (12/3/2013 9:39:00 AM)

    Lovely poem and nicely concluded:
    'Like pious part of my soul
    Trapped in confines of a sinners heart.....' (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,554 Points Lyn Paul (12/2/2013 5:28:00 AM)

    Words put together so well with emotion. Excellent with support and beautiful comments from your fans (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,712 Points Hazel Durham (12/1/2013 9:00:00 AM)

    Suberb picture you have drawn with the rose as a symbol of everything pure in the whiteness that is life, as we leave our own trail of sins, goodness, hope and love as we struggle and fight for who we are!
    You have written a perfect gem! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,555 Points Tony Karas (12/1/2013 6:14:00 AM)

    Beautiful write! A rose found amidst that snowy frozen terrain! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 481 Points Danny Draper (11/30/2013 2:11:00 AM)

    Interesting the colour and depth of the promise of the bud and its potential of seeds a primordia of seeds, an ovum a promise, in all things a promise of to defy the austere. Nicely written. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,111 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/28/2013 11:03:00 PM)

    Wow amazing poem! Yor metaphor is brill and how u end it is esp impressiv. Do read my latest poem too. Warm wishs. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,075 Points Noreen Carden (11/26/2013 5:09:00 PM)

    Hi Lucifera what a beautiful poem lovely read well done (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,731 Points Valerie Dohren (11/26/2013 12:20:00 PM)

    Great use of metaphor - a lovely poem Lucifera. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 35 Points Michael Franco (11/26/2013 7:33:00 AM)

    Your an amazing writer far better than I can ever be continue writing (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,224 Points Babatunde Aremu (11/26/2013 5:42:00 AM)

    Great write. I like the use of imagery. Keep writing. Do read my poems and comment (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 26, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 26, 2013

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