Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 50,058 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

Venus - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Early morning, evening and night,
I see a star twinkling bright,
I love sweetheart your pleasing light,
Unlike moon, don’t change your sight,
And it’s you not changing your phases,
Why the sun so cruelly erases,
From blue paper your lovely face,
Polygonal charms and your grace,
Where do you sleep during the day,
Like a teen aged doll made of clay,
Are you in love, what do you dream,
Feel you running in my vein’s stream,
A distant beauty beyond my reach,
The old admirer what do you teach.

She looked at me with a tangent smile,
The cold old guy in a moment juvenile!
I stretched my arms towards the sky,
It’s love in that one dreams to fly,
The bright star performed her duty,
Filled my heart with love and beauty!

Topic(s) of this poem: juvenile

Comments about Venus by Akhtar Jawad

  • Gold Star - 45,404 Points Valsa George (8/6/2015 11:12:00 AM)

    Splendid picture to go with a splendid poem! A 10 (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 72,031 Points Kelly Kurt (8/6/2015 10:31:00 AM)

    A wonderfully penned piece to the evening star and goddess of love (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 51,817 Points Kumarmani Mahakul (8/6/2015 6:15:00 AM)

    The bright star performed her duty,
    Filled my heart with love and beauty! ...... really amusing. A brilliant poem having stunning expression. Enjoyed with attractive photo provided. Many thanks Akhtar sir....10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,321 Points Khalida Bano Ali (8/6/2015 3:47:00 AM)

    A sweet and beautiful poem.......................................10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,301 Points Jaishree Nair (8/6/2015 3:33:00 AM)

    Well articulated and rhymed.enjoyed the word flow (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 6, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 6, 2015

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