Treasure Island


(Scratches on the page, making noise. / New York City)


4: 24 in the morning.
You know-41 years ago.
100 feet off the ground.
GRUNTS-pounding ground.
memos - memos - memos
VINEYARD-war of aged -WINE TIME.
10 million cars in a RICE PADDY - WHY? ? ? WHY? ? ? ?
COWBOY-COWBOY-#-1- tell COWBOY-10.00 dollars-[ok].
LBJ landed in CAM RHAN BAY- sun- oil -[I'm SURE].
NO-NO-GOD-GOD-B-52-rain dropp BOMBS-[again].
[[[ on the 50 yard line -snap-NAMATH has the ball ]]]]]-GOD
IN -VIET NAM - [roll another one-great STUFF]-{{MAN}}{{MAN}}.
[camp]-[[great vintage war] - GOLD - GOLD-[TOP SECRET]
shurrrrrrrr-[don; t tell the MOM'S & Dad's]- MY SON.
****MOVIE STARTS AT 8: 00*****$ 2.50 adult 1.25 kids.
4: 33- cry time-4: 33 cry time-4: 33 cry time.
GOD to Moses; 'I, AM, THAT I AM'
Cain killed Abel-America killed Viet Nam.
ME-4: 35- AM - just let me yell! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

3/20/2009 Joe Poewhit [4: 38-AM]


Submitted: Friday, March 20, 2009
Edited: Friday, March 20, 2009

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