Void Poem by Simiwuna John lodam
Void
Dead at birth,
end 'fore beginning.
Is there pain felt at the end of a smile?
Feel my soul wandering place to place,
soulessly upon my worries,
i lay.
I know u feel it too.
I cannot know,
i shall'nt bother.
Tides and cloud,
come and go.
And So shall all.
Tis the easiest questions,
i reply to, but raises the most concern.
What is it you ponder?
I beg thee,
grant me audience.
Not of evil but of concern.
Stand naked before thee.
brace me.
Embrace me,
and I in return.
Life is a journey and our existence depands on our act and our words; but can we walk the talk? ? ? ? Life is a concept where most of the questions asked, getting diiferent reply & point of view not same at all times. FAITH and belief are our guidence and if the right path being taken, we shall reach the purpose of our existance and suffering that we have to go thru since beginning. Good Poem
Embrace me, and I in return...breaks the void. Good expression and imagery portrayed here. Well done.; D
This poem is almost like a song. I love the construction of this poem
Really deep the opening lines. Heavy on emotions and expressions. There is a continuing pursue of the notion of death, in the lines...'Tides and cloud, come and go. And So shall all: ....There is also a feeling of companionship that i like at the end of it. 'Embrace me and I in return' Good! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/7/2024 5:53:35 PM # 1.0.0.1119
facing your fears and even embracing death. this a very deep poem.