Well In Time (Inspired By Current Time - Poem By Kumarmani Mahakul) Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Well In Time (Inspired By Current Time - Poem By Kumarmani Mahakul)

Rating: 5.0


When He ordered me to pray at once,
I left the bed,
I washed my hands,
my mouth and my feet.
I walked to a nearby mosque,
and when I started praying,
I found myself in a different moment.
Alas! I could not follow His orders well in time.
How can I get what I prayed for?
Tears came in my eyes!
How helpless is the man!
But my great teacher wiped my tears.
Congratulated me,
and asked me to smile,
as He gave me that
what I prayed for,
immediately when I intended to pray for it.
My intentions were well in time.
Man is not so much helpless!

Monday, May 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: prayer,timeless
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 19 December 2018

beautiful writing on inner feelings for the great Almighty

0 0 Reply
Susan Williams 30 May 2018

I like that title and the element of time in this piece

0 0 Reply

A blessing is given in His own time, even if we will not ask for it. Wonderful poem. So humbling.10

0 0 Reply
Kelly Kurt 21 May 2018

A sense of peace is within us all. A touch on the shoulder takes on significance. But I do love everyone. Especially me. : -)

1 0 Reply
Robert Murray Smith 21 May 2018

A unique write from a unique poet.++10

2 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success