Whenever you let me in
your little corner,
we can do whatever
anytime you wanna,
I know you're a bit younger
but what's the fuss,
it's about hangin' out
see, that's what's up,
we can shoot a lil' pool
eight-ball or nine
I might even let you win
so you won't start crying(ha, ha)
or we could get a small table
have the candles lit,
drink a few 'white russians'
or that expensive shit,
but if you hate that idea
and you have one better
it's really up to you
we can do whatever,
a night out on the town
is what I'm hoping,
but if you wanna take it further
my night's wide open
but hurry up and decide
because my pool que' is smoking!
i like the OG smooth pick up. when she is ready she is ready but in the mean time a mans got to get his money while his cue is smokin'.
Like the humour a lot, very good poem, two extra good lines....... My night's wide open and Because my pool que's smoking. very good writing. (still laughing)
A really great poem, women always get their own way, it's the way of the world. A great write.
Like it, whatever your idea in...it sounds good Bernard, hope you finished touring! then rest much_Unwritten Soul
It is true, a 'beggar' has no choice.Let the lady decide. Make her think she is the boss and you will be her owner. Interesting poem!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this poem is invitational and lyrical has a music quality to it