when you believe in someone,
don't let them take your beliefs along with them.
when you follow a path along with them,
don't let them make your path dirty.
when you trust them,
don't let them abolish god's trust in you.
when you have faith in them,
don't let them make you faithless.
when you do all good things for their goodness,
don't let them ignore your deeds.
and when you love them,
don't let them make you lonely.
Dear Tanya I happen to come to your page again and again for i love reading your poems they are always full of heart I have some more new poems just go through them and tell me something Thanks
Nice write tanya.. Wish it could.be.little bit polished with rhymeing.. But I never liked rhymeing! ! ! Keep writing tanya..and I will be there for any kind of help.. :)
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Your words echo in the hearts of those with sentiment and that understand that life is not just material wealth. As a promising poet you have made this clear.
Well penned. Really good. We are responsible for safeguarding our treasures.
So true, we cannot hand over our own power to someone else, I love this beautiful and insightful write!
Beautiful poem with a deep thought. Very beautiful message you are telling through a poem. Compromise, but not on your goodness. Never anyone fool you or take undue advantage if you....very positive message. Loved it.
It carries a message about making friends, make compromises but don't compromise goodness. A nicely penned poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So true, expressed wirh wisdom and understanding, we have to remain true to ourselves even in a relationship! Lovely write!