tanya gupta


What Success Is? - Poem by tanya gupta

success is the success of beliefs and thoughts,
success is the battle which have been saught.
success is not about getting fame and name,
but reaching the hieghts being the same.
success doesn't mean to get money,
but to remain as sweet as sugar and honey.
success comes if you chase it harder,
and an honest try is its starter.
success is not the thing to be waited,
but a depiction to be stated.
success is the dream which comes true,
when napping goes away from you.
success is not a game of letters,
but a truth which really matters.
success is the fruit of one's life,
which takes a lot of patience to hive.
success doesn't come by being ahead from all,
but to respect the things, from big to small.
this is the poem for success to preach,
the real value of life which it uses to teach.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

this is to know what success really is, we think that being succesfull means having heavy bank balance,4 or 5 servants who may roam around and most importantly if we are known by the surroundings. but i think we have only one life and only one chance to be successfull, so for the sake of this one chance we should first become successfull inside ourselves then for the world because when one dies he remembers the deeds he had done throughout his life not his bank balance or any thing else and being successful inside is just about being great..thanks, hope this poem will effect you all..

Comments about What Success Is? by tanya gupta

  • Gold Star - 4,960 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (12/22/2014 12:06:00 AM)

    Tried much to illustrate success with rhyme. Nice your project to demonstrate the subject. I request you to read my poem about success...I AM SUCCESSFUL MAN (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,564 Points Paul Sebastian (12/19/2014 7:24:00 AM)

    I must congratulate you for your profound understanding of what true success is. That at your age! I feel happy and proud to read your poem. Your lines rhyme and flow well. You are gifted, keep writing, Tanya. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 111 Points Thomas Duncky (12/3/2014 6:26:00 AM)

    success doesn't mean to get
    money,
    but to remain as sweet as sugar
    and honey.
    read this again and t feel good still (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,229 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/9/2014 5:19:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Tanya. Success is what we feel good at heart. I loved reading each lines... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 184 Points Vizard Dhawan (4/24/2014 10:00:00 AM)

    path breaking and blockbuster poetry.....! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 140 Points John Brown (4/23/2014 1:57:00 PM)

    A nice poem Tanya. The rhyming is unusual in places, and there are a few spelling errors, but the sense of the poem isn't affected - I get the message. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 183 Points John Rickell (4/4/2014 8:55:00 AM)

    What a lovely piece of writing and philosophy more people need to think like this before the worldis a kinder place. have you read the English poet John Clare and the American Robert frost? I think you will enjoy them both. Thankyou for your poem (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 753 Points Mike Barrett (4/1/2014 1:57:00 PM)

    Tanya, have you ever considered that success might just be the creation of a state of consciousness within which the true self, Soul, is in acceptance with all of life and is thus truly happy? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Subhakanta Sahu (3/26/2014 3:28:00 PM)

    Oh! wonderful thought! bright defination of sucess. wish you all success. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dannell White (3/22/2014 12:19:00 PM)

    this poem is a guidance to never give up it is the angel above all heaven to keep faith and hard work is everything when come to success (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 111 Points Thomas Duncky (3/22/2014 2:35:00 AM)

    'success is the dream which comes true,
    when napping goes away from you.' That line right there is striking awesome! You are a great philosopher above all you are as a poet my dear Tanya! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eleonora Nieuwjaar (3/10/2014 9:24:00 AM)

    Yes it did. Thanks for sharing. [3 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Sadvansha Munshi (3/9/2014 8:19:00 AM)

    you write very beautilfully ;) another amazing poem :)) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,719 Points Md Asadullah (3/2/2014 10:56:00 AM)

    This is one of your best poems tanya, frankly speaking this type of poem is not expected from girl of your age, kudos! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 11 Points Vivek Vikram Singh (3/1/2014 11:52:00 PM)

    Very well written piece of writing.A true depiction of what success is! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,759 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (2/28/2014 10:25:00 AM)

    Success is a very relative matter....tanya......though you have composed it in your concept nonetheless better..... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 21, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 13, 2014


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