When I Fall Poem by Terence George Craddock (Spectral Images and Images Of Light)

When I Fall

Rating: 4.5


when I fall mere spent autumn leaf
mourn not passage winter season
celebrate life in change colours spent


Copyright © Terence George Craddock

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Miroslava Odalovic 12 March 2013

wow reminds me so much of a rock ballad -if i die tomorrow buy a tambourine silently sing and do not grieve over me, wonderful and short, or the other way around ;)

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Paul Brookes 11 March 2013

what an emty voidless poem this is no soul no heart no hope no like

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