When I Was Introduced To Love Poem by Akhtar Jawad

When I Was Introduced To Love

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I had thought love is a play of life!
Alas! Could not see the sharp blade knife!
Love! You made me so much fragile,
What I was! Just a beautiful tile,
A tile on earth but touching the sky,
An ostrich with wings, that cannot fly,
You broke me in a number of tiles,
decorated your floor from Ganges to Niles,
and then you started your exciting romance,
on whispers of my song your nude dance!
You made me a mirror to enjoy your beauty,
and then turned me out from your cruel heart.
What a love you are! I am nothing but your art!
I think I have performed now my duty,
No more an ostrich, I’m out of the sand,
for a takeoff on a runway I stand,
Yes Sweetheart! Now I can fly,
With your thrown knife coming back to sky!

Monday, September 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: flight
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 11 September 2015

You are travelling on the wheels of love's chariot! What a fantastic take off!

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Charity Nduhiu 10 September 2015

This was a nice introduction to love. Sweet one

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Bisma Mirza 08 September 2015

amazing one really! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10 on 10.............

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 September 2015

Love has wonderful role in life definitely and this makes mind fragile. Love whispers through sweet songs. Love is definitely sweet heart that flies in mind. So amazing poem shared...10

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Khalida Bano Ali 07 September 2015

An amazing imagery, yes he'll go back........................................10

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