Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 9,229 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

When Love Speaks! - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

The first showers of rain when it sprays on the earth
As if the earth eagerly waiting to quench its thirst
It Spread the aroma of love all around
Which Knocked my heart and felt as if new love was born.

When the first virgin sun rays touched the earth and
Spread the warmth of love
The earth waiting to feel the warmth of touch
Felt as if the warmth touched my heart speaking of love.

The colourful butterflies were so naughty
asked me teasingly
Whats going on in your heart
That you are blushing with love.

The beautiful fragrance of flowers
Spreading their fragrance all around
Made me feel that as if essence of love is
Covering me all around.

The mischievous waves came running towards me
And splashed the waters and showering me with love
I don't know when I missed my steps and fell into the love
And it hugged me so tightly and took me deep into its heart.

Love always comes in disguise
And it grip you so tightly that one cannot escape.

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is my very first attempt to write one romantic song. I took inspirations from your songs..I dont know whether I could bring all essence of love thru this poem. Still its my first try...The hindi version i have posted. I wanted to come up with something new.

Kavitha.....5. Pyaar ki Aahaat!

Comments about When Love Speaks! by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Gold Star - 7,729 Points Hazel Durham (6/7/2015 8:39:00 AM)

    A captivating dance of love with nature's beauty leaving it's mark of importance! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 8,901 Points Allotey Abossey (5/25/2015 11:06:00 AM)

    Well expressed. God bless you for talking about love in a biut'ful way (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,681 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (5/20/2015 8:42:00 AM)

    Bursting with a beauty that is both creative and compelling! Very well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 719 Points Lalitha iyer (5/16/2015 3:34:00 AM)

    nice metaphors Geetha, simple direct style............... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 992 Points Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair (5/8/2015 1:35:00 AM)

    The aroma of wet earth
    Signs of a new birth
    And as drops begin to fall
    Our hearts are held in a thrall

    The most romantic season well described in your poem (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,910 Points Ken E Hall (5/6/2015 10:25:00 PM)

    Romantic so with rain and flowers to speak of love..an original way in a poem to sing out love...I think I will throw away my umbrella...regards (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,910 Points Ken E Hall (5/6/2015 10:25:00 PM)

    Romantic so with rain and flowers to speak of love..an original way in a poem to sing out love...I think I will throw away my umbella...regards (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/4/2015 6:56:00 PM)

    The first showers of rain when it sprays on the earth
    As if the earth eagerly waiting to quench its thirst.. on my liens...10

    it thunders
    when showers
    down pour
    bringing relief everywhere (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,387 Points Valsa George (4/29/2015 9:26:00 AM)

    Love always comes in disguise
    And it grips you so tightly that one cannot escape.

    A beautiful love poem with an arresting ending! ! Enjoyed reading it..... Are you still in its gripping hold....? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,561 Points Lyn Paul (4/17/2015 8:00:00 PM)

    Superb title that fits like a glove. Such a beautiful song that we would love to sing with you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 176 Points Naima Ansari (4/16/2015 9:02:00 PM)

    A heart-touching poem, ma'am! While reading it, I was smiling on my own as if I was wandering in the lines your poem. Just Loved it (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,500 Points Uma Ram (4/11/2015 12:14:00 AM)

    The colourful butterflies were so naughty
    asked me teasingly
    Whats going on in your heart
    That you are blushing with love.

    Beautiful expression of a woman's real tender love mam. Especially when youngtters of today are caught in meshes of false relationships, the poem tells of the real divinity of love. thanks for sharing mam. Felt it! Thanks for your valuable comments of my poem, The Maid's Daughter, mam. Felt motivated. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,127 Points Kee Thampi (4/9/2015 2:47:00 AM)

    soul of God is not in word, it is in a rosy smell of
    The beautiful fragrance of flowers
    Spreading their fragrance all around (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,538 Points Paul Sebastian (2/6/2015 7:36:00 AM)

    A well written poem on your experience of love. When love engulfs you become overwhelmed. You expressed that beautifully in the last stanza. Score 10. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2015 5:25:00 AM)

    he first showers of rain when it sprays on the earth
    As if the earth eagerly waiting to quench its thirst... lovely lines.10

    when love speak
    it is on peak
    where no one shall hear
    but respond and bear (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,513 Points Saheb Mohapatra (11/3/2014 6:04:00 AM)

    great way to describe love.........good use of words.......thanks for sharing it with us..........wonderful imaginations. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,939 Points Soulful Heart (10/27/2014 9:51:00 AM)

    hMmmmm love is in the air....indeed when the first whisper of love is felt then seems to join hands and speak to us of its joy and bliss... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,950 Points Khalida Bano Ali (10/26/2014 1:39:00 AM)

    Love always comes in disguise
    And it grip you so tightly that one cannot escape.
    How true you are and how beautiful is the poem! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,072 Points Heather Wilkins (8/22/2014 12:49:00 PM)

    a beautiful poem nice imagery carried the reader away (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (8/19/2014 9:02:00 PM)

    Successful you are! A lovely poem on love. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, October 31, 2014


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