Geetha Jayakumar

Silver Star - 7,536 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

When Love Speaks!


The first showers of rain when it sprays on the earth
As if the earth eagerly waiting to quench its thirst
It Spread the aroma of love all around
Which Knocked my heart and felt as if new love was born.

When the first virgin sun rays touched the earth and
Spread the warmth of love
The earth waiting to feel the warmth of touch
Felt as if the warmth touched my heart speaking of love.

The colourful butterflies were so naughty
asked me teasingly
Whats going on in your heart
That you are blushing with love.

The beautiful fragrance of flowers
Spreading their fragrance all around
Made me feel that as if essence of love is
Covering me all around.

The mischievous waves came running towards me
And splashed the waters and showering me with love
I don't know when I missed my steps and fell into the love
And it hugged me so tightly and took me deep into its heart.

Love always comes in disguise
And it grip you so tightly that one cannot escape.

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

Submitted: Wednesday, August 07, 2013
Edited: Friday, October 31, 2014

Topic of this poem: love


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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is my very first attempt to write one romantic song. I took inspirations from your songs..I dont know whether I could bring all essence of love thru this poem. Still its my first try...The hindi version i have posted. I wanted to come up with something new.

Kavitha.....5. Pyaar ki Aahaat!

Comments about this poem (When Love Speaks! by Geetha Jayakumar )

  • Veteran Poet - 2,582 Points Paul Sebastian (2/6/2015 7:36:00 AM)

    A well written poem on your experience of love. When love engulfs you become overwhelmed. You expressed that beautifully in the last stanza. Score 10. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,974 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2015 5:25:00 AM)

    he first showers of rain when it sprays on the earth
    As if the earth eagerly waiting to quench its thirst... lovely lines.10

    when love speak
    it is on peak
    where no one shall hear
    but respond and bear (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,461 Points Saheb Mohapatra (11/3/2014 6:04:00 AM)

    great way to describe love.........good use of words.......thanks for sharing it with us..........wonderful imaginations. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,905 Points Soulful Heart (10/27/2014 9:51:00 AM)

    hMmmmm love is in the air....indeed when the first whisper of love is felt then seems to join hands and speak to us of its joy and bliss... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,768 Points Khalida Bano Ali (10/26/2014 1:39:00 AM)

    Love always comes in disguise
    And it grip you so tightly that one cannot escape.
    How true you are and how beautiful is the poem! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (8/22/2014 12:49:00 PM)

    a beautiful poem nice imagery carried the reader away (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 7,217 Points Neela Nath (8/19/2014 9:02:00 PM)

    Successful you are! A lovely poem on love. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,237 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (7/21/2014 12:39:00 PM)

    So true of loving words that bring love in disguise quite a stranger taking you along a fairy land............very nice (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,922 Points Ken E Hall (7/20/2014 5:51:00 AM)

    Makes one happy that when love holds you you cannot escape and your gentle picture of love in the poem is a breath of fresh air indeed hmmmmm...regards (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,611 Points Amitava Sur (7/2/2014 8:11:00 AM)

    a lovely art work on love where it emanates it's fragrance all over, declaring it's alluring ecstasy .. very well enjoyed Geetha. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,142 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/20/2014 9:14:00 AM)

    A piece of beauty, a colorful painting, a work of art, my dear daughter you are not Geetha, you are Tagore's Geetanjli. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vidyanath Av (8/15/2013 1:42:00 AM)

    so true and worth reading Geetha....way to go! ! ! !

    loved it! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,508 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/10/2013 9:56:00 PM)

    Love always comes in disguise. Nicely said. Beautiful poem expressing love. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/10/2013 11:35:00 AM)

    Thank you for all the lovely comments. Thanks a lot. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,035 Points Hazel Durham (8/9/2013 1:04:00 PM)

    So beautiful with amazing imagery that gives a magical tone of the wonder of love! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,554 Points Dinesh Nair (8/9/2013 9:29:00 AM)

    It is an impressive poem from your side and kudos to you for making it a poem that speaks straight into the mind of the reader. A clean 10 for you Ms Geetha. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 386 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (8/8/2013 10:12:00 AM)

    The rain, the sun, the flowers, the butterflies and the waves all bring love in disguise, is well presented in this beautiful poem, Geetha! Enjoyed! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/7/2013 11:24:00 PM)

    Thank you, Heather for the lovely comment... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (8/7/2013 10:57:00 PM)

    beautiful imagery in this one Geetha. lovely song I would like to hear it put to music (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,583 Points Ramesh Rai (8/7/2013 10:54:00 AM)

    beautiful write beautiful imagination (Report) Reply

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