Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 8,190 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

When Love Speaks! - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

The first showers of rain when it sprays on the earth
As if the earth eagerly waiting to quench its thirst
It Spread the aroma of love all around
Which Knocked my heart and felt as if new love was born.

When the first virgin sun rays touched the earth and
Spread the warmth of love
The earth waiting to feel the warmth of touch
Felt as if the warmth touched my heart speaking of love.

The colourful butterflies were so naughty
asked me teasingly
Whats going on in your heart
That you are blushing with love.

The beautiful fragrance of flowers
Spreading their fragrance all around
Made me feel that as if essence of love is
Covering me all around.

The mischievous waves came running towards me
And splashed the waters and showering me with love
I don't know when I missed my steps and fell into the love
And it hugged me so tightly and took me deep into its heart.

Love always comes in disguise
And it grip you so tightly that one cannot escape.

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is my very first attempt to write one romantic song. I took inspirations from your songs..I dont know whether I could bring all essence of love thru this poem. Still its my first try...The hindi version i have posted. I wanted to come up with something new.

Kavitha.....5. Pyaar ki Aahaat!

Comments about When Love Speaks! by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/4/2015 6:56:00 PM)

    The first showers of rain when it sprays on the earth
    As if the earth eagerly waiting to quench its thirst.. on my liens...10

    it thunders
    when showers
    down pour
    bringing relief everywhere (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 21,188 Points Valsa George (4/29/2015 9:26:00 AM)

    Love always comes in disguise
    And it grips you so tightly that one cannot escape.

    A beautiful love poem with an arresting ending! ! Enjoyed reading it..... Are you still in its gripping hold....? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,133 Points Lyn Paul (4/17/2015 8:00:00 PM)

    Superb title that fits like a glove. Such a beautiful song that we would love to sing with you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 139 Points Naima Ansari (4/16/2015 9:02:00 PM)

    A heart-touching poem, ma'am! While reading it, I was smiling on my own as if I was wandering in the lines your poem. Just Loved it (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,600 Points Uma Ram (4/11/2015 12:14:00 AM)

    The colourful butterflies were so naughty
    asked me teasingly
    Whats going on in your heart
    That you are blushing with love.

    Beautiful expression of a woman's real tender love mam. Especially when youngtters of today are caught in meshes of false relationships, the poem tells of the real divinity of love. thanks for sharing mam. Felt it! Thanks for your valuable comments of my poem, The Maid's Daughter, mam. Felt motivated. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,038 Points Kee Thampi (4/9/2015 2:47:00 AM)

    soul of God is not in word, it is in a rosy smell of
    The beautiful fragrance of flowers
    Spreading their fragrance all around (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,073 Points Paul Sebastian (2/6/2015 7:36:00 AM)

    A well written poem on your experience of love. When love engulfs you become overwhelmed. You expressed that beautifully in the last stanza. Score 10. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2015 5:25:00 AM)

    he first showers of rain when it sprays on the earth
    As if the earth eagerly waiting to quench its thirst... lovely lines.10

    when love speak
    it is on peak
    where no one shall hear
    but respond and bear (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,506 Points Saheb Mohapatra (11/3/2014 6:04:00 AM)

    great way to describe love.........good use of words.......thanks for sharing it with us..........wonderful imaginations. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,908 Points Soulful Heart (10/27/2014 9:51:00 AM)

    hMmmmm love is in the air....indeed when the first whisper of love is felt then seems to join hands and speak to us of its joy and bliss... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,383 Points Khalida Bano Ali (10/26/2014 1:39:00 AM)

    Love always comes in disguise
    And it grip you so tightly that one cannot escape.
    How true you are and how beautiful is the poem! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,811 Points Heather Wilkins (8/22/2014 12:49:00 PM)

    a beautiful poem nice imagery carried the reader away (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,634 Points Neela Nath (8/19/2014 9:02:00 PM)

    Successful you are! A lovely poem on love. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,135 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (7/21/2014 12:39:00 PM)

    So true of loving words that bring love in disguise quite a stranger taking you along a fairy land............very nice (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,753 Points Ken E Hall (7/20/2014 5:51:00 AM)

    Makes one happy that when love holds you you cannot escape and your gentle picture of love in the poem is a breath of fresh air indeed hmmmmm...regards (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,049 Points Amitava Sur (7/2/2014 8:11:00 AM)

    a lovely art work on love where it emanates it's fragrance all over, declaring it's alluring ecstasy .. very well enjoyed Geetha. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,496 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/20/2014 9:14:00 AM)

    A piece of beauty, a colorful painting, a work of art, my dear daughter you are not Geetha, you are Tagore's Geetanjli. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vidyanath Av (8/15/2013 1:42:00 AM)

    so true and worth reading Geetha....way to go! ! ! !

    loved it! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,699 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/10/2013 9:56:00 PM)

    Love always comes in disguise. Nicely said. Beautiful poem expressing love. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,190 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/10/2013 11:35:00 AM)

    Thank you for all the lovely comments. Thanks a lot. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, October 31, 2014


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