Geetha Jayakumar

Bronze Star - 6,642 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

When Love Speaks!


The first showers of rain when it sprays on the earth
As if the earth eagerly waiting to quench its thirst
It Spread the aroma of love all around
Which Knocked my heart and felt as if new love was born.

When the first virgin sun rays touched the earth and
Spread the warmth of love
The earth waiting to feel the warmth of touch
Felt as if the warmth touched my heart speaking of love.

The colourful butterflies were so naughty
asked me teasingly
Whats going on in your heart
That you are blushing with love.

The beautiful fragrance of flowers
Spreading their fragrance all around
Made me feel that as if essence of love is
Covering me all around.

The mischievous waves came running towards me
And splashed the waters and showering me with love
I don't know when I missed my steps and fell into the love
And it hugged me so tightly and took me deep into its heart.

Love always comes in disguise
And it grip you so tightly that one cannot escape.

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

Submitted: Wednesday, August 07, 2013
Edited: Friday, October 31, 2014

Topic of this poem: love

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This is my very first attempt to write one romantic song. I took inspirations from your songs..I dont know whether I could bring all essence of love thru this poem. Still its my first try...The hindi version i have posted. I wanted to come up with something new.

Kavitha.....5. Pyaar ki Aahaat!

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  • Gold Star - 23,705 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2015 5:25:00 AM)

    he first showers of rain when it sprays on the earth
    As if the earth eagerly waiting to quench its thirst... lovely lines.10

    when love speak
    it is on peak
    where no one shall hear
    but respond and bear (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,380 Points Saheb Mohapatra (11/3/2014 6:04:00 AM)

    great way to describe love.........good use of words.......thanks for sharing it with us..........wonderful imaginations. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,855 Points Soulful Heart (10/27/2014 9:51:00 AM)

    hMmmmm love is in the air....indeed when the first whisper of love is felt then seems to join hands and speak to us of its joy and bliss... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,502 Points Khalida Bano Ali (10/26/2014 1:39:00 AM)

    Love always comes in disguise
    And it grip you so tightly that one cannot escape.
    How true you are and how beautiful is the poem! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,612 Points Ken E Hall (7/20/2014 5:51:00 AM)

    Makes one happy that when love holds you you cannot escape and your gentle picture of love in the poem is a breath of fresh air indeed hmmmmm...regards (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,198 Points Amitava Sur (7/2/2014 8:11:00 AM)

    a lovely art work on love where it emanates it's fragrance all over, declaring it's alluring ecstasy .. very well enjoyed Geetha. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,338 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/20/2014 9:14:00 AM)

    A piece of beauty, a colorful painting, a work of art, my dear daughter you are not Geetha, you are Tagore's Geetanjli. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,553 Points Dinesh Nair (8/9/2013 9:29:00 AM)

    It is an impressive poem from your side and kudos to you for making it a poem that speaks straight into the mind of the reader. A clean 10 for you Ms Geetha. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 141 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (8/8/2013 10:12:00 AM)

    The rain, the sun, the flowers, the butterflies and the waves all bring love in disguise, is well presented in this beautiful poem, Geetha! Enjoyed! (Report) Reply

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