prior to
our dinner date
she called
and said
she was late
'so hurry up! '
'not like that.'
Charles, when it comes to women... expect the unexpected. Nice write! Brian
I am a bit slow.....did not catch on for a few brow furrowing moments...but then....AAHhaa! Barb
because he forgot to wear a hat not like that Thanks for the smile Mr A Hugs Anna xxx
Excellent! a concise narrative complete with story, misunderstanding, the penny dropping, surprise reaction and humour too - very clever. Justine
I like that I had to read this two and a half times before I got it......! Sum Dim, me! For all the men out there who think it's the worst when she's late for a date... there ARE worse things! Classic Chuck here, and thanks for the funny! ! ! Est : ]
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Well done Charles, got me thinking. 'A closed mouth gathers no feet, ' This was great, Love Duncan