Where Does My Love Go Poem by Arlene Dery

Where Does My Love Go

Rating: 5.0


When I haven't seen your face,
Or felt the warmth of your embrace,
When you are but a thought,
Just a vision I have sought.
The love I feel, I need to know,
Where does my love go?
My love may ride the whirling wind,
But does it reach you in the end?
Can you feel love in the breeze,
Or hear me call, in rustling leaves.
Will a cloud release my love,
With the rain fall from above.
Will a thought of love come near,
With a sky so crystal clear.
A flake of snow, may fall on thee.
A touch to say, please think of me.
Does the ocean have no land,
To spill my love upon the sand.
So you may take a step and feel,
The love I sent you, oh, so real.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 13 October 2021

Beautiful love poem nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 October 2021

CONGRATULATIONS for this oh so beautiful LOVE poem, so loveliest rhymed and best choice of Poem Hunter and Editors that this is The Member Poem Of The Day.5 Stars full. I have enjoyed enormously. Keep writing, dear Poetess!

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Tj Becker 24 September 2008

this was a dynamic poem. I've always been a romantic and always felt the rain, sun and breeze could carry our love to another so they could feel us. A really nice write and an easy read. Well done

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Arlene Dery

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