Lora Colon

Silver Star - 3,727 Points (26 September 1944 / Missouri - United States)

Where It All Began - Poem by Lora Colon

Hold me in your memory,
Wrap me around your heart,
Repeat the words you said to me
That made the heavens part;
Love me in a mountain stream
Or on the burning sand.....
Take me back to where it all began

Take my hand and lead me back
To that moment of ecstasy;
Help me recall what witnesses
Were never meant to see;
Love me 'til the angels blush
And offer reprimand.....
Take me back to where it all began

Grass of green and yellow blades,
You kept our secret well,
In summer's green and autumn's gold,
What stories you could tell!
Passionate moments etched in time,
And so our days were planned.....
Take me back to where it all began

Sing the song and light the flame
And stir my heart once more,
The wind will be our blanket,
Peering eyes will be ignored;
With hearts so bound together,
Our love will forever stand.....
Take me back to where it all began


Comments about Where It All Began by Lora Colon

  • Gold Star - 8,906 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/12/2013 8:51:00 PM)

    This is a wonderful poem of love and passion,10/10! Each stanza is quotable, I liked the last one the most, though!
    'Love me 'til the angels blush
    And offer reprimand.....
    Take me back to where it all began'
    Yes, 'where it all began' is the sweetest memory that is unforgettable, and we all wish to go back there.
    ' Passionate moments etched in time,
    And so our days were planned.....
    Take me back to where it all began
    Heart warming! (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,622 Points Ken E Hall (10/3/2013 4:24:00 AM)

    lovely poem seems it all turned circle for the end is where it begins where hearts hold hands always, very nice to read Where it all began...regards (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,680 Points Valerie Dohren (10/2/2013 2:16:00 PM)

    Really lovely poem Lora, very well written and rhymed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 139 Points John Brown (9/29/2013 3:10:00 AM)

    I like this one. Time is fleeting, and the most should be made of every moment. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 18 Points Abhishek Mishra (9/28/2013 10:54:00 AM)

    Beautiful write...loved it: -) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,250 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (9/28/2013 1:10:00 AM)

    Take me back to where it all began

    a yearning deep and divine, sketched with dripping memories! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 109 Points Zandile Wardle (9/27/2013 8:31:00 AM)

    lovely...i like. good staff (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,238 Points Tiku . (9/27/2013 7:13:00 AM)

    so soothing to the heart and mind.love the flow and emotion in it.liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,928 Points Savita Tyagi (9/25/2013 5:33:00 PM)

    So beautiful! almost spiritual. Words flowing with so much ease. Thank you for sharing, enjoyed every line. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 25, 2013


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