Who Knew? Poem by Aaron Priestly

Who Knew?

Rating: 3.5


Who can know the troubles of your heart,
Or why you smile your broken smile.
Who knows where to start
With a shattered heart living in denial.

Who can see the torment at home,
Or why you cry in the hall.
Who can say that they leave you alone
Or that they truly know you at all.

Who can pick you up after a stumble
And wipe away your tears.
Who is there to hear your whispered mumble
And to scare away your deepest fears.

Who can save you from the darkness
And deliver your soul into the light.
Who is there to see you are helpless;
Who is there to help you fight.

Who could know that you threw it all to hell,
Or that they lost something important.
Who could say, or who could tell
Now that the world is different.

Who knew what was really said
And why it was said that way.
Who can say their heart feels like lead,
Not knowing if it will last the stay.

Who can rise above the flames,
To create a new beginning.
Who can forget the blame
And begin their joyeous singing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanya Stanford 09 September 2008

This made me realize people are very much the same as each other. One does not know how someone else truly lives. Very good.

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Krystal Alley 07 September 2008

this poem is very very well written, i like it a lot, and 'who knew', is the perfect title for this poem...keep writing, and by the way, look at my poem, 'you say you love my....'.......my friends from the outside world(which means my friends that are not from poemhunter) really love this poem.. thx

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Greenwolfe 1962 06 September 2008

I am always interested in titles and how they relate to the poems. It appears that this title is a little off course in that regard. The story line is OK, but readers want to see some kind of changes occur during the poem. This onejust asks questions and no real answers emerge. GW62

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Tanya Stanford 28 August 2008

Sadly the only one to do this is yourself. Waiting for someone else might come to late. Lovely Use of words and felt the emotions.

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