Why Do You Show Me This Face? Poem by Alison Smith

Why Do You Show Me This Face?

Rating: 5.0


Why do you show me this face?
With dark circles about sunken eyes
Eyes that have ceased to sparkle
Eyes that have seen too much

Why do you show me this face?
With skin that no longer glows
Worn and lined no laughter lines
Playing around the lips

Why do you show me this face?
It only brings me to tears
It could have been a beautiful face
Now it shows its years

Why oh why mirror do you do this?
I clean you every day
So why do you show me this face
Surely its not the real me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlett Treat 05 March 2007

This poem had a sad ring to it, while AAARRRGGH! was written truly in jest. How-ever, there are days when I get up, and am so tired and really feeling my age that this one fits my feelings. Those are the days when I can't laugh about it and I miss my youth and abilities to do anything that I want. Thanks for sharing it with me! Loved it! Scarlett

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John Stroud 10 February 2007

Good poem! I have alot to learn from you. Thank You

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 08 February 2007

the true beauty is not what you see... but hidden inside of thee... great poem alison...

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Jim Foulk 08 February 2007

why does the mirror has to be so cruel. i ask that seem question every day. this was a very well thought out piece of work, great imagery, coming from the mind is a wonderful thing and you did a great job with this one. I give it a ten.

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Robert Howard 08 February 2007

A mirror can never show the real anyone but a poem make a good effort. Your's certainly does - a good honest look in the glass this shakes us out of the futility of living in the past.

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Alison Smith

Alison Smith

Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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