hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 35,464 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Why Submit To Nature? - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Why do we submit to nature’s sway?
Consider it casual and attention not pay,
The Sum always rise with powerful ray,
Heat waves may burn skin mid-day,

Path barren, rest certain so not to lay,
Not a single soul or children dare play,
So is the cycle and we always pray,
Areas we prefer which are always gray,

Darkness disappear with mild glow,
Dews depart with fresh air flow,
Plants raise head with resolve to grow,
Flowers open up with hot wave blow,

Eyes blind with little energy spark,
Boats turtle, aground with hit from shark,
Fear grip the mind with dog’s bark,
But rest whole body under tree in park,

Heat waves compel living beings to run,
Floods play havoc but children have fun,
Seek we refuge to escape nature’s fury,
No respite but justice in absence of jury,

Cool, breeze and fresh air plenty in hill,
Natures always offer life but not always kill,
As disease not go off without proper pill,
So nature may offer alternate for ill,

Immense wealth and beauty lie with nature,
Secure is the life if we believe in the future,
Vow not to destroy future and destiny,
Prepared for the worst to witness after mutiny


Comments about Why Submit To Nature? by hasmukh amathalal

  • Rookie Vijay Suwarnkar (10/9/2009 8:58:00 PM)

    Why I prefer double standard?
    Sometimes inner conscience revolt and bombard,
    Believe in what is told heard,
    Always protective and feared, (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Twinkle Vohra (10/3/2009 7:41:00 PM)

    Eyes blind with little energy spark,
    Boats turtle, aground with hit from shark,
    Fear grip the mind with dog’s bark,
    But rest whole body under tree in park (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Edwina K (10/3/2009 12:25:00 PM)

    Why do we submit to nature’s sway?
    Consider it casual and attention not pay,
    The Sum always rise with powerful ray,
    Heat waves may burn skin mid-day, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sadia Hussain (10/3/2009 9:53:00 AM)

    Darkness disappear with mild glow,
    Dews depart with fresh air flow,
    Plants raise head with resolve to grow, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ramdulari Sinha (10/3/2009 8:05:00 AM)

    Darkness disappear with mild glow,
    Dews depart with fresh air flow,
    Plants raise head with resolve to grow, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sita Kesri (10/2/2009 11:33:00 PM)

    Darkness disappear with mild glow,
    Dews depart with fresh air flow,
    Plants raise head with resolve to grow, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Venkat Ramanna (10/1/2009 10:31:00 AM)

    There lives wild animal inside,
    Nurturing evils and wrongs beside,
    Not allowing good to surface, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie K.v. Subbarao (10/1/2009 8:22:00 AM)

    Not a single soul or children dare play,
    So is the cycle and we always pray,
    Areas we prefer which are always gray, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Radha Seth (9/29/2009 11:15:00 PM)

    Eyes blind with little energy spark,
    Boats turtle, aground with hit from shark,
    Fear grip the mind with dog’s bark, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Saroj Davde (9/29/2009 10:05:00 PM)

    Why do we submit to nature’s sway?
    Consider it casual and attention not pay, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Poonam Suthar (9/29/2009 8:53:00 PM)

    So is the cycle and we always pray,
    Areas we prefer which are always gray, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kashi Paul (9/29/2009 9:20:00 AM)

    Darkness disappear with mild glow,
    Dews depart with fresh air flow,
    Plants raise head with resolve to grow,
    Flowers open up with hot wave blow, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Umesh Lalvani (9/29/2009 7:13:00 AM)

    Why do we submit to nature’s sway?
    Consider it casual and attention not pay,
    The Sum always rise with powerful ray,
    Heat waves may burn skin mid-day, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pami Panchal (9/29/2009 6:34:00 AM)

    Why do we submit to nature’s sway?
    Consider it casual and attention not pay (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Indani Narayan (9/28/2009 9:53:00 PM)

    Path barren, rest certain so not to lay,
    Not a single soul or children dare play, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Santoksingh Jadeja (9/28/2009 11:38:00 AM)

    Darkness disappear with mild glow,
    Dews depart with fresh air flow,
    Plants raise head with resolve to grow, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shilpa Maheswari (9/28/2009 10:16:00 AM)

    So is the cycle and we always pray,
    Areas we prefer which are always gray (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Suresh Vakil (9/28/2009 9:48:00 AM)

    Path barren, rest certain so not to lay, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rupa Shah (9/28/2009 7:45:00 AM)

    Path barren, rest certain so not to lay,
    Not a single soul or children dare play,
    So is the cycle and we always pray, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chetna Purohit (9/27/2009 12:05:00 PM)

    Why do we submit to nature’s sway?
    Consider it casual and attention not pay, (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 24, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 25, 2009


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