Wilderness Of Life Poem by Heather Burns

Wilderness Of Life

Rating: 4.8


Traveling
through
the
wilderness
of life

Many
thorns
along
the
journey

Leaves
cover
the
pathway

Leaving
behind
a veil
of tears

Tangled
after-
thoughts
of you

Causing
me to
lose
my way.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 19 July 2013

Life's journey is often rugged, sometimes strewn with thorns, but we have to be careful not to lose the way!

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Dave Walker 22 July 2013

A fantastic poem. To lose our way can be devastating, But to find ourselves again can be truly magical.

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Dee Corpolongo 22 July 2013

This is really great, from it's very fitting title, to the poem that follows. Wonderful and very true, for many others, including you....who have felt the pain of losing someone. Beautiful write.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 July 2013

Tangled after- thoughts of you Causing me to lose my way. Touched me!

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R.j. Wynn 20 July 2013

Like it. Sounds gloomy, I mean groovy.

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Valerie Dohren 20 July 2013

Life has many thorns and leafy paths, but we all find our way in the end. Lovely poem Heather.

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