Will You Deny? ? ? Poem by TARA.. Star
Will You Deny? ? ?
I wana make your life colourful,
I wana make your life meaningful
Wish to eradicate all nights of blue,
& add life to your life, for you
Wana see you attractive as red,
& pray whatever you wish you'll get
Wana make your life peaceful as green,
Wana see you realizing all your dreams
Hope your life will shine always like yellow,
but dont forget i'll always be your fellow
Simply wana paint your life,
&will strive just to see your smile
Purple, white or brown could be colours of your life,
but I'm a rainbow in your life will you deny..? ? ? ! !
a beautiful ending poem with rainbow colors all the way..well done tara
it's a simple mind poem but rich in meaning, i like it, i wanna make your life colorful i wanna make your life meaningful and i wanna make your life mine. nice work!
Your flow is quite as the softly moving sand, it gently pulls you in, loves color flash, snapped in you, of each fresh day with one found smile.....iip
Gentle swaying lines, paint your soul on the page my dear friend, written very well indeed
I have to admit, you are really good at this =] i love the things you write. x
I can see those beautiful colours of the rainbow in your poem awesome write--keep sharing anjali
This poem was okay but tried to hard to ryhme stealing focus from the beautiful story you were trying to present.8/10
Tara this is a lovely poem. I always love color in poetry and yours vibrates with your words. Thank you 10/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Poem has a playful way about it