Would you take me back if I told you I love you? Would you take me back if I told you I'm sorry? Would you take me back if I wrote you a song of LoVe? Would you forgive me if I ever hurt you? Would you be there for me if I needed someone too LoVe? Would you replace me if I wasn't there for you? Would you tell me I'm right even if I'm wrong? Would you lay with me untill I fall asleep? Would you ever leave me if I messed up? Would you tell me you still LoVe me even after I'm GoNe? ? Would You?
a question that the only answer is from the soul mate.... well expressed thoughts and well presented...good write...
You will find the one who is perfect for you when the answer is undoubtfully yes
What would you do when you fall for someone.Definitely a what you have described in here.Keep on writing dear.
No one shall say no 2 a young n smart poetess.....nice piece written from heart
I see a girl who is wanting to be accepted. She's afraid she isn't going to be good enough for the guy of her dreams. Why did the guy leave in the first place? After being hurt it's hard to open u, but it comes with time and maturity. I hope the girl in this poem finds fulfillment in life. Great work keep it up.10
A lot of Free Verse. If anything, all your poems so far have been Free verse. I was wondering, do you ever rhyme or have considering rhyming?
if he madly loves u that u r his life & soul so he won't see anyone but u for love is blind. if he loves u that much i'm sure he will do all what u said but when he does all of this be sure dear that he's not a human but an angel.
another passionate piece... let me know when u post more and i will be more than happy to read an comment..... thanks 4 sharing.
I would do all these things with you and some of them you wouldn't have to do.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice poem.reviling the inner thoughts which most times are never spoken...