Y..... Light Delight Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y..... Light Delight

Rating: 4.3


A fluff white cloud and a branch of lush casuarina,
Glorious bliss to the eye, wonderfully pure
Breezily dancing like a gracious ballerina,
Painted on the late morning sky of soft azure

Sheer and wild delight
Flows through my veins
Pushing firmly aside
Any sorrow or pains

The sun stands high over a heavenly sea
The green of the tree in yellowish rays
Celestial blue over snow-white breaking waves
What a rejoice, these resplendent light plays

The child in me jumps up inside
My soul is bathing in its delight
Fascinating nature, fine and bright
A stunning game of love and light

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This morning in Bachok...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 16 November 2012

A very beautiful and descriptive poem Aufie, love the imagery.

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Spiritual Seeker 18 November 2012

So so beautiful...I can feel it in my vein, missing Bachok...wish i am there now! Huge 10.

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Akram Saqib 18 November 2012

from where you create such enchanting words Sheer and wild delight Flows through my veins Pushing firmly aside Any sorrow or pains love to read dear

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Tanveer Sharma 18 November 2012

it is so beautiful. thanks for sharing your composition.

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Valsa George 01 December 2012

Captivating imagery, mirroring the luscious beauty of Nature! !

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Shahzia Batool 19 November 2012

My first visit to the page turned worthy enough after reading this poem, what is described so beautifully is felt on the pulse, even short and long line-arrangement, alternate-rhyme, and the triplet endings -all worked together to make the imagery of the fascinating nature...enjoyed the work! ! !

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Sreekala Sukumaran 19 November 2012

Hi... So beautifully written can really feel it.. Always love to read your poems.....

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Peter Maxharya 18 November 2012

I love the imagery i read and see the nature in the lines

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Tanveer Sharma 18 November 2012

it is so beautiful. thanks for sharing your composition.

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