Y/... Love And Peace Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y/... Love And Peace

Rating: 4.8


A red rose with heart shaped petals smiled at me
blissful love was flowing, it was so easy to see

Golden light shone peace through my hungry heart
Hunger, thirst and greed falling slowly apart

Finding love, finding peace, a sea of bliss
Finding peace, finding love, an ocean of tenderness

Sunday, June 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,peace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 26 September 2015

Great imagery, very vivid and clear! Love the age-old symbol of love - the red rose! White dove being the sign of peace, when combined they match perfectly with one another in your poem. The black ant possibly an adversary trying to come between love and peace, causing turmoil. Yet the strength of love (red rose) and peace (white dove) drove it away and remained true to love. Very beautiful depiction of love and peace, quietly delicate and peaceful. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Amitava Sur 24 September 2015

A happy life is comprised of love and peace what is portrayed here through the red rose with the dove. Thanks for sharing this lovely write.

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Chinedu Dike 03 September 2015

Dove - a symbol of peace and red rose - a symbol of beauty, a lovely depiction of peace and love well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Aufie and do remain blessed.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 13 July 2015

symbols of love and peace well put forward poetically, Nice to read..

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 June 2015

A black ant from its stalk! With the muse of life and love. Nice work.

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