Y// The First Leaf Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y// The First Leaf

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The living fresh greenness
of the first leaf of spring
Sure a perfect omen it is
of a most wonderful thing:

Soon the whole crown of the tree
'll be covered by a luscious greenery
of fresh, spring leaves, for all to see
A piece of close to absolute beauty

. The living fresh kindness
. of few of our loving acts today
. sure a perfect omen it is:
. a kindness revolution on its way.

. Soon the whole wide world
. will be engulfed in a kindness sea
. Quick go and spread the word
. Thisrevolution will change reality

Sunday, January 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: kindness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In this world greed seems big, but it is crumbling very fast
In this world kindness seems small, but is growing very fast
Our ever increasing drive to do small kindnesses is a sign
as the first of leave of spring of an upcoming kindness revolution!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 29 January 2016

Hi Hans.. I'm sending you a msg..

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Joseph Anderson 28 January 2016

Ah! Spring, you make it so appealing, I can hardly waitA grand depiction of the new rebirth along natures way. A very warming poem

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Abhilasha Bhatt 24 January 2016

The first leaf of spring brings a new life with a fresh and new start.....nicely written poem....thank u for sharing :)

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Ratnakar Mandlik 24 January 2016

Soon the whole wide world will be engulfed in a kindness sea quick go and spread the word Nothing better could happen for you and me. Marvelous call and it is need of the hour in this materialistic and self centred modern societies. Thanks.

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Unwritten Soul 24 January 2016

The first leaf will be a first proud of a tree, and first time to produce fresh air to all.... and your first verse here is that kind of leaf.... and nothing better could happen for u and me at the end.. :)

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