Bernard Snyder

(11-07-1959 / Savannah Ga.)

'You'


I've sailed around the world twice
I've swam in the Carribean seas
I've seen the sunset over many beaches
I've even dated celebrities,
I've shaken hands with former presidents
I've been taken to places I never knew,
but nothing was ever so breathtaking
than the day I first saw you,
not only were you so beautiful
but you spoke with such eloquence
in all my worldly travels
I haven't met anyone like you since
I've been asked many times
which has the most memorable view
I've seen a lot of fascinating things
but nothing as captivating as you!

Submitted: Tuesday, October 04, 2011
Edited: Thursday, October 27, 2011

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  • Rookie - 26 Points Rekha Mandagere (1/11/2012 2:13:00 AM)

    Friend that 'YOU' must be an angel of Caribbean sea, capture her soon to your heart before others captivating her. Nice flow of sentiments. I always love the way you express your deep feelings with unimaginable ease and flow. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 533 Points Unwritten Soul (10/17/2011 7:52:00 PM)

    Ah.......it amusing and lovely inked.. :) You traveled in many places and met many great people but when someone travel a feeling in your heart, it made you heart filled more in emotions, sweet emotion..Now i believe you completing all traveling around the world and found the most fascinating one, you can swim deep in feelings, you could feel the breeze and wave without a beach spell, even a closer heart than any people...the one you called 'You' actually the whole package of world tour..i am sure you traveled anywhere with that special 'You' without move even crossing the time..LOve it..this so beautiful and lovely poetry _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Stefanie Fontker (10/4/2011 4:48:00 PM)

    Such sweet words, whomever you're writing for is very lucky! Love is a magnificent thing, isn't it? (Report) Reply

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