You sleep alone inside your shell,
Like ugly demon in the hell,
Like murders wait for painful time
To make their awful hellish crime.
You aren`t alive because your thought
Are full of darkness fear taught.
You dream about power soul,
But don`t clean heart and make your goal.
You go through life with lots of flaws,
And mind from other people close.
Your loneliness is drop of rain.
It flows with blood and gives you pain.
Your hands are down, you just cry
Because you creep but want to fly.
You are a dead man every day,
Because without hope stay,
Because you wait for fortune flame,
And send for other people blame.
Because you don`t believe in light
That`s why you have deleted flight.
That`s why you are in other side
From me and my unhappy mind,
From my life story and from trust…
You aren`t alive and death is fast.
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I LIKE STORY, I LIKE DRAMA IN THE POEM BECAUSE PEOPLE HAVE LESS TIME TO READ ALL TYPES OF GENRE OF LITERATURE NOW A DAYS....SO POEM COULD BE 3 IN ONE, , , , HOW EVER, THE POEM I LIKE THE MOST AS THE IDEA IS SUPER AND THE IDEA IS WELL CRAFTED INTO A GOOD PIECE OF ART.....THANKS
Good way of narrating a story. your narrative technique is amazing though it sad saga of life. It's very amusing and entertain along with gloomy feelings it invoke in me. It is strange poem on somebody........ Great poem - keep writing. I give A1 rating....Hope your poem invoke different feelings to readers as it is Multi dimensional......
we choose to live or die, with every step we take... sadly, many choose death. good poem!
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I would like to translate this poem
There is a great fear, and many people are almost dead, but life is spiraling forward, life is like driving on the highway, nobody is first, nobody is last, everybody is on their own way, that is why we cannot see clearly where they are, however, everything is in the hands of God and He knows what goes on.