Treasure Island

shonie Griffin

(Caldwell Idaho)

You said goodbye


Sad and lonely,

Emptiness and pain,

Without you in my life.

My tears fall like rain

I'm feeling so sad,

The pain that I feel,

Sharp, and piercing,

It cuts like a knife.

I cry every night.

The pain is so deep.

The longing I feel.

It makes me weep.

There's an emptiness,

In my broken heart,

I knew that I'd loved you,

Right from the start.

It makes me so sad,

You don't feel the same.

The raindrops they fall,

keeping pace with my tears,

My mind it races;

It gives in to my fears.

I gave it my all,

But you couldn't see,

We were made for each other,

We were destined to be.

My heart is breaking,

You don't love me,

You wont even try.

You said it was over.

And you told me goodbye.

Submitted: Sunday, June 22, 2014

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