My mind has exploded like big bang
Cause you prefer your criminal gang!
They raped you now you love them
Thus you play your dirty game!
I preferred you to all other girls
But you don’t know about the real pearls!
It seems you have gone astray
So you won’t step on my way!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A poem tinged with distaste, jealousy and perhaps regret. Do you think the flow might be helped by more attention to the number of syllables in each line? I think this helps if you are trying to write a poem with rhyming lines. For instance; My wounded mind exploded with a bang (10 syllables) Because you prefer your criminal gang! They raped, yet now you show them love, not blame So this is how you play your dirty game! Hope this helps